Ruined
My unifying vision. The vision I have of the play Ruined is one of denial and truth. Mama is in an obvious state of denial towards the things going on outside of her place. She has a hard exterior that tells us she is the power of her own house. In reality Mama is a hurt war wounded woman. In reality she has no power over what goes on in her bar and is at risk of losing her business and her girls at any moment. I want to portray a message of truth about what is going on in the Congo, as well as many other parts of Africa. American and European media only covers the chaos if they cover news from that part of the world at all. The situations innocent people are put in and the mindless abuse by soldiers and “liberators” are something that the world needs to take note of. Neocolonialism has put these countries in their current positions and as responsible individuals we must get the world powers to act in a way that this conflict might be ended. I want to set the play in an unrealistic setting in the beginning and have the costumes, lighting, and setting break down as the play progresses and Mama lets herself be realistic about how dangerous her position is living in the Congo.
Theatre
The theatrical space I ended with was the Radio City Music Hall located in Manhattan. I choose this location for the fact that it is the largest inside theatre in the world. It sees more than three hundred million people since it opened. It is a large attraction for people from all over the U.S. and foreign travelers. Ruined sends an important message and mass awareness will give the best hope for action to these events that are going on in other parts of the world. Scenic Design
The setting of the bar I would look for is simple and clean. Fairly classy, and a nice pool table to the side. A little stage where Sophie sings, and a band to the side. Eventually the bar would become more run-down. The pool table would be ripped and warped, the bar stools would be rough looking. Most of the people in the congo live in slums, the rusty metal, splintered wood, and peeling paint would definitely portray a realistic feeling for the audience.
The biggest part of this production would be a drop behind the set where real images of what is taking place in the congo on the screen. These images would be used to emphasize statements, create an undeniable reality for the audience, and move with the breakdown of Mama's facade.
Costume Design
Something like this for the girls in the beginning of the play. As the soldiers and rebels both start hanging out in the bar and Mama starts to break down into who she really is the costumes begin to show hints of reality. The outfits would be the same but loose and torn, darker colors. When the climax happens as they hear the gun fire and the soldiers start to approach the costumes will be completely realistic. All the women, soldiers, and Mr. Harari will have a new costume to change this.
Another example of outfit styles for Sophie, Josephine, and Salima.
Mama's costume, probably in a solid red. It would make her stand out and seem very confident. This would wear down as well. Eventually Mama would be dressed in an old, faded dress.
The soldiers and rebels would have matching costumes. I want something simple that makes them faceless so each would be in a black suit and the difference would be in the color of their ties. Osembenga and Kisembe would have something slightly more elaborate also featuring their sides color. Osembenga would be in more of a mobster style of dress and Kisembe would look like a politic.
Christian would be in an outdated, homey looking suit, very much like a traveling salesman.
Mr. Harari would be in a white suit consistently throughout the show. He shows profit and gain and exploits the Congo in his own way. I would not change much about him when Mama makes the change in character, the Congo isn't permanent for his character.
Lighting
The lighting in the beginning of the play should be very dreamlike. The lights should create a warm but false feeling on the stage.
This image to me has a very dreamlike feel to it and I would like the inside of the bar to look like this. Eventually the lights will become dirty looking, reds will fade in when the soldiers and commanders come and go from Mama's place. It will create a sense of danger, until the final scene where Mama dances with Christian. It will be white and soft and warm, but this time not so fuzzy, it will be more genuine.
Sound
The sounds throughout the play would go along with the congo setting. Occasionally noises will be heard from the outside of the bar, gunshots, animals, occasional yells. I want these things to go on softly from outside the bar to reinforce that safety feeling of the indoors. When the soldiers start to invade the bar and threaten Mama and the women the sounds become loud and chaotic, the barrier of the walls has been broken at this point. Since the setting is a bar the music would be cheery and progress into something more somber. The band would play with Sophie and a jukebox would be present (eventually turning into an old scratchy radio).
This could be an interesting twist on the production of this play, and still tell a strong message. The use of pictures will be a great aid to the message, but as the play end with a glimmer of hope I would want the imagery to show the the great good and happiness people are capable of, as opposed to the horrors we can create. I would hope this production would really move the audience and it would become more to them than just a show.
Thursday, May 13, 2010
Tuesday, May 11, 2010
Script Analysis
1. Identify the MAJOR CONFLICT of the play. This is between two characters or a character and a group of characters or force.
In Ruined I think the conflict is an internal one for Mama’s character. On one side Mama is a strong woman who has created a neutral zone in a world of chaos. On the other side Mama is a wounded woman who feels broken, she will not accept that her situation is bad because of her pride.
2. Identify what these characters REPRESENT.
one part of Mama represents a strong, capable woman running a smart business in an ignorant bliss of the situation outside of her doorsteps. Towards the end of the play Mama shows us her true self she has been fighting. She is a woman who has been torn down by her own country men full of hurt.
3. Identify the TURNING POINT of the major conflict. This is the point of no return. At this point in the story the protagonist and the antagonist are destined to reach the climax of the story.
When Osembenga rushes into Mama’s place he demands to know where Kisembe is. The soldiers from each side prove to be cruel lying men. I think at this point Mama realizes she has gotten in too far. She can no longer lie to herself that she has created a safe haven in the middle of a warring country. She begins to fear she will be torn down again by war.
4. Identify the CLIMAX of the major conflict. This is the height of the conflict.
There is no where else for it to go and it breaks open, explodes, or dies. Be as specific as possible. Write the scene number and describe the specific moment.
The climax of the major conflict was in Act 2 scene 6. After Mr. Harari and his trnasport leave without Sophie, Fortune runs into the bar with Osembenga accusing Mama of hiding soldiers. He and his soldiers grab Mama, Sophie, and Josephine and throw them to the floor and are going to rape them for lying to them. At this moment Salima enters the room bleeding and screaming for the soldiers to finally stop. At this moment Salima defiantly says, “You will not fight your battles on my body anymore.” I believe at this moment the feelings Mama has had inside of her finally explode and she realizes the terrible state her country is subjected to.
5. Identify the RESOLUTION of the conflict. The conflict comes to a conclusion. Be as specific as possible. Write the scene number and describe the specific moment.
The resolution for Mama is when Christian returns and offers her his love. Even though she still refuses to go to the city and reveals to him that she is ruined he offers to stay and help her run her business. At this point I believe Mama has come to terms with herself as a woman living in these tragic times. She then accepts to dance with him.
6. Identify the FINAL ACTIONS of the two figures involved in the major conflict. Then explain its significance.
Mama’s final action of proclaiming herself as ruined showed that she has come to terms with herself as a woman who did not have protection when she needed it most and was violated for a wrongful cause. She started to accept this about herself I believe when Sophie was so sure she would break away from the jungle and be repaired. Mama came to terms with her life and sadly it is one that she shares with many other women.
7. Identify each of the characters' (in the major conflict) over all OBJECTIVES. This is a want that drives them all the way through the play. Keep this active and playable for an actor. Think of action verbs.
One part of Mama wants to be in control. The other part of Mama wants to find trust and safety
8. Identify the SUBJECT of the play. Force yourself to one word.
The subject of Ruined is truth.
9. Identify the IDEA of the play.
The idea of Ruined is that there are terrible things going on all over the world, even right outside our doorsteps. Regardless of how hard it is to accept what is going on, acting like it isn’t taking place and being neutral will not stop these things from taking place. It most certainly will not keep you out of the conflict. The ability to realize what is going on and taking action to fix what you can is necessary for change.
Write a short paragraph, 75 to 100 words that describes what the play is ABOUT to you and what it conveys. This is your interpretation of the over all meaning of the play FOR YOU.
For me the play ruined conveyed such a strong message of what is going on in the Congo to the women and families stuck in the middle of internal conflict. Mama’s character showed much denial of what was taking place around her bar, she also had a lot of resentment she displaced on the women who worked for her. I think this is relative to the media in the U.S. the lack exposure given to these issues puts many of us in a state of denial of other world issues. I interpreted this play as a way to open peoples eyes and hearts to the issues of the people in the Congo. On a greater scale I think having compassion for those around us, even the ones who seem stronger, is very important to making the world a better more accepting place.
In Ruined I think the conflict is an internal one for Mama’s character. On one side Mama is a strong woman who has created a neutral zone in a world of chaos. On the other side Mama is a wounded woman who feels broken, she will not accept that her situation is bad because of her pride.
2. Identify what these characters REPRESENT.
one part of Mama represents a strong, capable woman running a smart business in an ignorant bliss of the situation outside of her doorsteps. Towards the end of the play Mama shows us her true self she has been fighting. She is a woman who has been torn down by her own country men full of hurt.
3. Identify the TURNING POINT of the major conflict. This is the point of no return. At this point in the story the protagonist and the antagonist are destined to reach the climax of the story.
When Osembenga rushes into Mama’s place he demands to know where Kisembe is. The soldiers from each side prove to be cruel lying men. I think at this point Mama realizes she has gotten in too far. She can no longer lie to herself that she has created a safe haven in the middle of a warring country. She begins to fear she will be torn down again by war.
4. Identify the CLIMAX of the major conflict. This is the height of the conflict.
There is no where else for it to go and it breaks open, explodes, or dies. Be as specific as possible. Write the scene number and describe the specific moment.
The climax of the major conflict was in Act 2 scene 6. After Mr. Harari and his trnasport leave without Sophie, Fortune runs into the bar with Osembenga accusing Mama of hiding soldiers. He and his soldiers grab Mama, Sophie, and Josephine and throw them to the floor and are going to rape them for lying to them. At this moment Salima enters the room bleeding and screaming for the soldiers to finally stop. At this moment Salima defiantly says, “You will not fight your battles on my body anymore.” I believe at this moment the feelings Mama has had inside of her finally explode and she realizes the terrible state her country is subjected to.
5. Identify the RESOLUTION of the conflict. The conflict comes to a conclusion. Be as specific as possible. Write the scene number and describe the specific moment.
The resolution for Mama is when Christian returns and offers her his love. Even though she still refuses to go to the city and reveals to him that she is ruined he offers to stay and help her run her business. At this point I believe Mama has come to terms with herself as a woman living in these tragic times. She then accepts to dance with him.
6. Identify the FINAL ACTIONS of the two figures involved in the major conflict. Then explain its significance.
Mama’s final action of proclaiming herself as ruined showed that she has come to terms with herself as a woman who did not have protection when she needed it most and was violated for a wrongful cause. She started to accept this about herself I believe when Sophie was so sure she would break away from the jungle and be repaired. Mama came to terms with her life and sadly it is one that she shares with many other women.
7. Identify each of the characters' (in the major conflict) over all OBJECTIVES. This is a want that drives them all the way through the play. Keep this active and playable for an actor. Think of action verbs.
One part of Mama wants to be in control. The other part of Mama wants to find trust and safety
8. Identify the SUBJECT of the play. Force yourself to one word.
The subject of Ruined is truth.
9. Identify the IDEA of the play.
The idea of Ruined is that there are terrible things going on all over the world, even right outside our doorsteps. Regardless of how hard it is to accept what is going on, acting like it isn’t taking place and being neutral will not stop these things from taking place. It most certainly will not keep you out of the conflict. The ability to realize what is going on and taking action to fix what you can is necessary for change.
Write a short paragraph, 75 to 100 words that describes what the play is ABOUT to you and what it conveys. This is your interpretation of the over all meaning of the play FOR YOU.
For me the play ruined conveyed such a strong message of what is going on in the Congo to the women and families stuck in the middle of internal conflict. Mama’s character showed much denial of what was taking place around her bar, she also had a lot of resentment she displaced on the women who worked for her. I think this is relative to the media in the U.S. the lack exposure given to these issues puts many of us in a state of denial of other world issues. I interpreted this play as a way to open peoples eyes and hearts to the issues of the people in the Congo. On a greater scale I think having compassion for those around us, even the ones who seem stronger, is very important to making the world a better more accepting place.
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